the road not taken

i want to hold you. feel my lips on your body and your lips on my body. i want my arms around you. my hands touching your smooth skin. your hair.

my whole body has been waiting all it's life for you to work it. waiting all my life for the touch of your hand.

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  • ^ What is United States?

  • ^ A nickel is five cents in United States currency, nickel is also a kind of metal as well.
    In this sentence it is not literal, merely an expression.

  • ^ Thanks, I've taken notes and I will be more prepared for the next posting. One question though. What is a nickel?

  • How about
    "I have been waiting all my life for you to pleasure my body in the way that only you could."

    "I have thought often how your touch, and only your touch, would satisfy me. You would be sweet wine in my life, where all my other lovers have been merely water."

    Or,

    "Thats it baby, you shove your nickel in me, I'll be your love machine! I'll work that thing uh-huh, yeah baby, Stick it in and lets go!"

    Any of those is better than just "work it"

  • ^ What? "Work it" is not good? What would you have said?

  • "for you to work it" ??? wtf! omg that sucks. read a romance novel. ha "work it" you go girlfriend 2 snaps. WHAT A MOOD KILLER.

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  • : /

  • ^ the latter :[

  • so was that road missing from your map or were you too stubborn to stop and ask for directions??

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