My dad died so i wrote a poem

I lost my dad to cancer when i was 9 years old . I am 17 now and still grieving over him. I don't know if you can comment on here but if so, tell me what you think about this wrote this poem i wrote in his memory.

Cloudy day

Today's the day.
The cloudy day.
The day they took my dad away.

I only was 9,
Doing just fine
But then they did what they did.

I fourt
I cried
I ran away
But nothing took the pain away.

I was lost
Scared
Didn't knew what to do.
But Then one day, I found you.

You sat me down,
And said with a grin
cry my child,
It's not a sin

Let the whimpers and doubts,
Fly out of your mind,
You are a child,
You are one with your mind.

I knew it's hard,
But you'll be fine
After all,
you are only 9

9 is the age
to skip and play
Not flooding the ground
with tears of pain.

9 is the age,
To go out, have fun
Play dogs, play people
Whatever you want.

Today's the day,
I learnt to have fun
To laugh out loud
To play in the sun

Because Today's the day.
The cloudy day.
The day they took my dad away.
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by Katherine Ingram