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My dad died so i wrote a poem
I lost my dad to cancer when i was 9 years old . I am 17 now and still grieving over him. I don't know if you can comment on here but if so, tell me what you think about this wrote this poem i wrote in his memory.
Cloudy day
Today's the day.
The cloudy day.
The day they took my dad away.
I only was 9,
Doing just fine
But then they did what they did.
I fourt
I cried
I ran away
But nothing took the pain away.
I was lost
Scared
Didn't knew what to do.
But Then one day, I found you.
You sat me down,
And said with a grin
cry my child,
It's not a sin
Let the whimpers and doubts,
Fly out of your mind,
You are a child,
You are one with your mind.
I knew it's hard,
But you'll be fine
After all,
you are only 9
9 is the age
to skip and play
Not flooding the ground
with tears of pain.
9 is the age,
To go out, have fun
Play dogs, play people
Whatever you want.
Today's the day,
I learnt to have fun
To laugh out loud
To play in the sun
Because Today's the day.
The cloudy day.
The day they took my dad away.
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by Katherine Ingram
I'm sorry. Good poem.
So sad and such a lovely poem.
My heart goes out to those who hurt.
Submit your beautiful poems on allpoetry, it's a good website for that. I used it and submitted 300plus :)
Every step I take, every move I make
Every single day, every time I pray
I'll be missing your hand
Thinkin of the day, when you went away
still hurts yet I have found my way.
I feel you will be happy to know
Your little angel is grown up now
Can handle anything high or lows
But every thing I do
I always remember you...
You have written a beautiful poem for your dad each word is spoken from heart. #hugs#