Forgotten Mist- an EEnE fanfic- chapter 17

NOTE: THIS IS CHAPTER 17 OF MY STORY, IT IS ADVISED THAT YOU RIP YOUR EYES OUT IF YOU HAVE READ THE PREVIOUS CHAPTERS TO UNDERSTAND THAT NOTHING IS GOING ON. Just search for "s***" in the confession post search to see all previous chapters.

"Ed, Edd, Eddy, you're all here!" I began to cry as I saw them all floating above me.

"What the h*** are you talking about?"

I awoke from what must have been a dream, my vision still blurry.

"Wha-" My voice could barely rise above a whisper, my body felt like lead.

"Try not to move, you were badly injured."

The blur began to take shape. In front of me was an older man, a doctor obviously. He continued to look me over, making little notes and muttering to himself. Behind him stood my mom and dad, my mom crying tears of relief, or maybe pain because my dad kept punching her.

"Mom, dad......" I trailed off again, frustrated with my own weakness. My mom walked over to me, pushing the doctor out of the way.

"Oh my baby," she cried, "why did that man shoot you?"

My dad walked over as well. Shoving my mom into the wall, he punched me in the face, his eyes streaming with tears of joy.

"Honey, I'm glad your alive." My dad smiled, the first time in a long time he gave a real smile.

"Nanks ad" I managed to say my words slightly mangled by my now broken nose.

"You were very lucky young lady," The doctor said as he finished whatever he was writing, "The bullet didn't go as deep as we thought, but you need to get some rest."

"Who was the man with the gun?" My mom asked me.

Suddenly there was a burst of light in the room, and a wave of force that knocked everyone standing to the floor.

Standing in the area of the bright light was a man in a silver suit wearing a helmet, the front of the helmet holding a vocal device.

His voice was fuzzy, the speaker making him sound like a radio with bad reception.

"I'm Jake, from the future! Forgotten Mist, you need to heal as soon as possible, I need your help to gather the most famous Confessionpost trolls from its history, and save the world!"

TO BE CONTINUED

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  • I kind of like this story too. I'm not gonna say anything else. :(

  • ^LOL! ^_^

  • I read it too, I'm ashamed to say.
    I didn't hate it.
    I feel dirty.

  • ^Give it credit, it has better punctuation, and spelling. Oh come on, it sounds like a B-movie, and I want to see which confessionpost trolls they put in it.

  • Awesome! Please write another chapter of this, please please please! You have my support! And your chapter really is better.

  • i have never read a chapter, don't know why

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