Tell Me What You Think

It's a poem I wrote..

So desirable
But not deniable
Falling hard
But afraid of crashing
It’s frightening,
Yet exciting
Never felt like this before
Nowhere even close
But with every second I’m sinking deeper
And the feeling just surrounds me
I’m terrified and vulnerable
And if I continue to fall,
I think I’ll end up in love.

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  • How beautiful. x

  • I love it! I think you commented on my poem, but I love yours! Good job!

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